I genuienly think people would actually come to watch this to show how long the girl has left and how its effecting her life in many different waays without telling anyone about her condition. This i a brilliant idea, I'd watch it.
This sounds like something i would definitely watch. The ending about her finding out that her has terminal cancer is the key part that jus makes me ask whats going to happen next and really makes me want to know the rest of the storyline which is the key thing. Brillian work Yasmin :)
The pitch was well presented. I liked you're idea and the genre was established very clearly. I think you have a range of shots and your story is unique.
i generally think that yasmins pitch was better then farjanas pitch this is because the genre was well established , she presented it well. It also has a range of shots which she described in alot of detail which would give her group a good mark
I believe that people would actually come to watch this. The pitch is clear and understandable and the genre is established quite clearly. The uses of ranges of camera shots are also useful.
I really like that idea also the genre seems to be very clear aswell. The Pitch was excellent. The range of camera shots you are going to do will be excellent if you can get them done properly. I would definitely watch this video.
I like the use of camera shots used to portray the established genre, it is understandable and quite clear to the audience. however I like Reshma's pitch more, as it was very very clear that it would be about their established genre.
This is an excellent pitch. It is very interesting and i think it is going to catch the audiences attention. This pitch clearly shows the genre but if you present it more then this would be better.
The storyline is structured well and there are very interesting aspects to the character. I think the genre is established clearly however i think you could improve by having more camera shots. Although it is a film that i would watch at the cinemas.
I genuienly think people would actually come to watch this to show how long the girl has left and how its effecting her life in many different waays without telling anyone about her condition. This i a brilliant idea, I'd watch it.
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This sounds like something i would definitely watch. The ending about her finding out that her has terminal cancer is the key part that jus makes me ask whats going to happen next and really makes me want to know the rest of the storyline which is the key thing.
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ReplyDeleteThe pitch was well presented. I liked you're idea and the genre was established very clearly. I think you have a range of shots and your story is unique.
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ReplyDelete, she presented it well. It also has a range of shots which she described in alot of detail which would give her group a good mark
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I believe that people would actually come to watch this. The pitch is clear and understandable and the genre is established quite clearly. The uses of ranges of camera shots are also useful.
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I really like that idea also the genre seems to be very clear aswell. The Pitch was excellent. The range of camera shots you are going to do will be excellent if you can get them done properly. I would definitely watch this video.
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I like the use of camera shots used to portray the established genre, it is understandable and quite clear to the audience. however I like Reshma's pitch more, as it was very very clear that it would be about their established genre.
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The storyline is structured well and there are very interesting aspects to the character. I think the genre is established clearly however i think you could improve by having more camera shots. Although it is a film that i would watch at the cinemas.
ReplyDeletei really like the fact, how Yasmin has confidence to write a clear pitch liek this. however i think she could of make her charectors more interesting.
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