I really like this idea, its a way to show how different people take on life threatening news, when showin the flashback of her at the hospital you could fade it out like the camera could go out of focus and refocus into that scene however its really sweet and i feel people would want to watch this to see her rocky journey.
This idea is also good. As you and yasmine have near enough the same idea the fact that she has cancer is the key to you story. i really like yours especially when the title comes on at the end 'taking a risk' because it makes me want to know what kind of risks is she willing to take Really Good Farjana :)
The genre in this is established well as like in Yasmin's. The dialogue and the situation in hand seems to be quite touching to the audience and is one which is very emotional as her cancer is terminal.
this is an excellent pitch that doesn't need to be changed, however I think it should a bit longer or shorter as I feel it may not be fitted in 2 mins,
This pitch is really good, it clearly shows how people take on life threatening news. The genre is well presented and the audience will be very interested to find out what happens next.
I really like this idea, its a way to show how different people take on life threatening news, when showin the flashback of her at the hospital you could fade it out like the camera could go out of focus and refocus into that scene however its really sweet and i feel people would want to watch this to see her rocky journey.
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This idea is also good. As you and yasmine have near enough the same idea the fact that she has cancer is the key to you story. i really like yours especially when the title comes on at the end 'taking a risk' because it makes me want to know what kind of risks is she willing to take
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The genre in this is established well as like in Yasmin's. The dialogue and the situation in hand seems to be quite touching to the audience and is one which is very emotional as her cancer is terminal.
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this is an excellent pitch that doesn't need to be changed, however I think it should a bit longer or shorter as I feel it may not be fitted in 2 mins,
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This pitch is really good, it clearly shows how people take on life threatening news. The genre is well presented and the audience will be very interested to find out what happens next.
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